第八篇：
【寫(xiě)作要求】
“燦爛星空，誰(shuí)是真的英雄?”做出驚天動(dòng)地業(yè)績(jì)的人是英雄，為追求真理獻出生命的人是英雄，在平凡崗位上默默奉獻的人是英雄……
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一．Dr Norman Bethune
1.Nationality(國籍): Canada
2.Hobby: taking photos
3.Main stories: saved a lot of Chinese people; opened hospitals; invented medical tools
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二．Liu Xiang
1.Nationality: China
2.Hobby: singing
3.Main stories: won the first
4.Olympic gold medal in the men's 110m hurdles event in Athens; set a world record in the same event in Lausanne
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從上面信息卡中選擇一位英雄，以The Hero in My Heart為題寫(xiě)一篇短文。
要求：①包含所選信息卡上的內容;②適當拓展，如學(xué)英雄的感想、行動(dòng)等;③不能出現表明你身份的信息;④詞數80左右，不含已給出部分。
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me,
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文1】
The Hero in My Heart
As we know， most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Dr. Norman Bethune is the hero in my heart. He was a great doctor from Canada.
Dr Bethune was good at performing operations. And taking photos was his hobby. In 1938， he came to China. He opened hospitals and invented medical tools. He worked so hard that he saved thousands of Chinese people. He didn’t stop to take care of his own injured hand and died.
I am deeply moved by his stories. So I’ll work hard today and do my best to help others.
【優(yōu)秀滿(mǎn)分范文2】
The Hero in My Heart
As we know, most people have heroes in their hearts. For me, Liu Xiang is the hero in my heart. He is a famous Chinese sportsman.
Liu Xiang is good at running. In 2004， he won his first Olympic gold medal in the men，s 110m hurdles event in Athens. Then, he set a world record in the same event in Lausanne. Besides training and taking part in competitions, Liu Xiang also likes singing and he sings well.
With his hard work, he is winning competitions one after another. This encourages me to study harder from now on.
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