【習作要求】

馬虎搞到兩張全興隊對國安隊的足球比賽入場(chǎng)券。他電話(huà)通知好友趙華洋，約他放學(xué)后在新華公園門(mén)口碰頭，一起吃晚飯，然后去看球賽。二人在飯店美美吃了一頓，到付賬時(shí)馬虎才發(fā)現自己把錢(qián)夾忘在了家里，入場(chǎng)券也在他的錢(qián)夾中。

【學(xué)生習作】

Ma Hu got two tickets of (1) a wonderful football match between Quanxing and Guoan. He was thinking of invite (2) his good friend Zhao Huayang to watch it together. He gave him a call and told him to meet at the gate of Xinhua Park after class and then had dinner (3) together.

They met each other on time and had good dinner (4) in a restaurant. When the waiter brought them the bill. Ma Hu found that he left (5) his wallet at home. The two tickets kept (6) in the wallet, too.

(1)of在這里不是表示所有關(guān)系，所以應把of改成for，表示“用途”。

(2)動(dòng)詞invite在介詞of的后面，應把它變?yōu)?ndash;ing形式。

(3)連詞and連接的應該是兩個(gè)并列的動(dòng)詞不定式，所以應把had改為to have。

(4)這里注意dinner前面有形容詞修飾時(shí)，那么應在形容詞前面加a。

(5)應把left改成had left。因為到“發(fā)現”時(shí)為止前面的動(dòng)作已經(jīng)完成，要用過(guò)去完成時(shí)態(tài)。

(6)此處是被動(dòng)語(yǔ)態(tài)，應加上were。

【名師點(diǎn)評】

這是一篇根據漢語(yǔ)提示寫(xiě)作的作文，也是 題中常常采用的一種寫(xiě)作方式。寫(xiě)作中要求要點(diǎn)齊全，時(shí)態(tài)準確，短語(yǔ)、句型運用較為恰當即可得高分。本文要點(diǎn)齊全，較好地體現了寫(xiě)作要求。只是文中細小錯誤較多，這會(huì )影響獲取高分。

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