來(lái)源:網(wǎng)絡(luò )資源 作者:中考網(wǎng)整理 2019-08-01 22:48:14
開(kāi)頭是作文在閱卷老師面前的第一次亮相,它將決定你所寫(xiě)的文章在閱卷老師心中所留下的第一印象。如果第一印象好,就意味著(zhù)有了良好的開(kāi)端,也就成功了一半。Good beginning is half done,我們該怎樣一提起筆就讓自己成功一半呢?
1. “開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”式開(kāi)頭
一般來(lái)說(shuō),文章的開(kāi)頭應盡量做到“開(kāi)門(mén)見(jiàn)山”,即要用簡(jiǎn)單明了的語(yǔ)言引出文章的話(huà)題,使人一開(kāi)始就能了解文章要說(shuō)明的內容。
① 對于敘事類(lèi)的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭把人物、時(shí)間、事件和環(huán)境交代清楚。如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:Last month,my family went to Huangshan by train. It took us ten hours to get there. What a long and tiring journey! We were tired but the beautiful scenery excited us.
② 對于論述性的文章,可以在開(kāi)頭處先闡明自己的觀(guān)點(diǎn),接著(zhù)展開(kāi)進(jìn)一步的論述。如“The Time and the Money(時(shí)間和金錢(qián))”的開(kāi)頭可以是:Most people say that money is more important than time. But I don't think so. First,when money is used up,you can earn it back,but……
2. 回憶性開(kāi)頭
在描述事件或游記類(lèi)的文章中,采用回憶性的開(kāi)頭往往更能吸引人的眼球。這種類(lèi)型的開(kāi)頭中通常含有描述自己心情或情緒的詞匯,如never forget (永遠無(wú)法忘記)、 remember (記得)、unforgettable (難以忘懷的)、 exciting(令人激動(dòng)的)、surprising(令人驚訝的)、sad (難過(guò)的)……如“A Trip to Huangshan(黃山之旅)”的開(kāi)頭還以這樣寫(xiě):I will never forget my first trip to Huangshan. 或It was really an unforgettable experience I had.
3. 疑問(wèn)性開(kāi)頭
在敘事類(lèi)或論述性的文章中,都可采用疑問(wèn)型開(kāi)頭,這樣既可以吸引閱卷者的注意又容易抓住中心。如“Planting Trees(種樹(shù))”的開(kāi)頭可以是:Have you ever planted trees? Don't you think planting trees is…… 再如“Traveling Abroad(出國之旅)”的開(kāi)頭可以是:If you have anopportunity to travel abroad, why not consider Singapore?
4. 倒敘式開(kāi)頭
在有的文章,特別是敘事類(lèi)的文章中,可以采用倒敘的寫(xiě)作手法,先寫(xiě)出事件的結果,再陳述過(guò)程。如“Catching Thieves (捉賊)”的開(kāi)頭可以這樣寫(xiě):I lay in bed in the hospital. I smiled at my friends even though my legs hurt. Do you want to know what happened to me? Let me tell you. It's a …… story.
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